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Onera
Sept 9, 2006 23:19:00 GMT -5
Post by Onara on Sept 9, 2006 23:19:00 GMT -5
Name: Onara Race: Parson's Chameleon Age: 5 Gender: Male Loyalties: None. Home: Tall trees
Appearance: He really doesn't have an appearence. The splicing of mole and chameleon and bear genes gave way to the ablility to change colour. He is around four feet long, and about three feet tall.
Personality: He really doesn't know how to act sometimes. He has the ferocity of a bear, kindness of the chameleon, and curiosity of a mole
lifestyle: Hunting is pretty much what he does. Though he may be five, he will live a very long time, and at five, he is already mature.
History: BEAR: The bear side of him was very ferocious before it was captured and sent to some strange island. He though he was scared of nothing. Nothing could scare him. But the sudden change did.
MOLE: The mole part of him wasn't really mean, or kind. Really, he was just plain curious. So when the humans people picked him up out of nowhere, he didn't care.
CHAMELEON: Though he was slightly scared, he didn't really care for his present surroundings. When the humans picked him up, he made a mental note to thank them. Then he changed his mind.
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uhdgal
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Onera
Sept 13, 2006 6:37:26 GMT -5
Post by uhdgal on Sept 13, 2006 6:37:26 GMT -5
I have some comments for this, since I don't think Bradexman's been on for a while. Your character can't change shape and have no special abilities, other than speaking english and having an extended life span. You need to work on the appearance as well. This character kind of looks thrown together.
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